Friday, February 22, 2008

Winter Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh, what far-westering moon
into the early morning winter sky
does crowd that sapphire plane
in abundant silver light?
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Toni Atchison
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Mary Gordley 23 February 2008

Ever so lovely. This is a brilliant piece of writing. Thank you ever so much.

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Richard Laroquette 23 February 2008

Toni, now this is nice stuff. I love the descriptions and the imagery in your work. Richard

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Con Nie 22 February 2008

A pleasure to read. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Patrick McFarland 22 February 2008

A wonderful piece. The freedom of the beat movement with the style of the renaissance. It's like Kerouac and Shakespeare sat down to write a poem. I give it an easy 10.

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Toni Atchison

Toni Atchison

Lincoln, IL
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