Sunday, May 11, 2008

Winter Moods Comments

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The cold long winter left me weary
The alpha men’s ideals has made me leery
I want to hatch this shell and be exposed
To break the sphere I’ve been enclosed
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Sonny Rainshine 11 May 2008

It's very hard to write a poem in which every line ends in end-rhyme without it sounding forced. You have succeeded magificently. Nice poem about resolution and change.

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