Tuesday, March 26, 2013

Winter Kiss Comments

Rating: 4.0

Snow is falling, winter breeze
clothes too thin, shaking knees
I kiss your cheek, and pull away
your eyes on mine, your hands stay
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Katerina Richmond
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Khairul Ahsan 02 July 2013

If the last line could match the rhyme, it would be wonderful. It's a nice poem anyway, and you make us warm.

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