Tuesday, October 27, 2015

Winter Is Coming Slowly Comments

Rating: 5.0

Little, little cold is arriving
With wings of coldness and snow
This will cover our minds sure
Pure heart will need warmness
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Indira Renganathan 18 July 2020

Nice depiction of winter in your verses....only a true poet can observe such changes in nature with his poetic mind to versify it in his poem....great work 10++

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Dogma Daniman 16 June 2020

Winter's slow arrival is nicely captured by your kind eyes. I feel imagery you have expressed a rich expression.

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Terry Craddock 23 December 2015

Warming Waiting Wallflower Trees spring opening sun caress warming fresh clothes waiting wallflower trees in new gowns adorned green growing Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Winter Is Coming Slowly' by the poet Kumarmani Mahakul. Dedicated to the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.

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Terry Craddock 23 December 2015

Leaf Mould Bless First New Buds leaf mould gift quilt blankets roots warming comforting protecting leaf mould bless first new buds Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Winter Is Coming Slowly' by the poet Kumarmani Mahakul. Dedicated to the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.

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Terry Craddock 23 December 2015

Spring Bud Leaf Mould Blessings leaf mould quilt blankets roots warming comforting protecting leaf mould bless first buds spring opening sun caress warming will clothe waiting wallflower trees in gowns adorned green growing Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Winter Is Coming Slowly' by the poet Kumarmani Mahakul. Dedicated to the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.

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Terry Craddock 23 December 2015

Cold Wrapping World Leaf Mould Warming Roots bare trees bare skies or grey overcast cold wrapping trees stripped naked leaves litter cover ground leaving leaf mould for roots warming comforting protecting Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Winter Is Coming Slowly' by the poet Kumarmani Mahakul. Dedicated to the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.

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Terry Craddock 22 December 2015

Sudden Timeless Slow Cold Creeping feel the cold slow cold creeping creeping over frost land a shroud chilling mist ground sudden timeless freezing beneath touch your fingertips stroking stroking land into ice stozen sterility binding ice ties shall dig claws into fields ice lacing barren frozen mute land freezing upon spring births life back into ice melting land regenerating into life fast pacing Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Winter Is Coming Slowly' by the poet Kumarmani Mahakul. Dedicated to the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.

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Terry Craddock 22 December 2015

Trees Stripped Naked bare trees bare skies grey overcast cold wrapping trees stripped naked litter leaves cover chill ground leaving leaf mould roots warming comforting protecting to bless birth first new buds spring opening to clothe trees in birth new gowns adorned green growing Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Winter Is Coming Slowly' by the poet Kumarmani Mahakul. Dedicated to the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.

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Terry Craddock 19 December 2015

'Slow coldness is covered by leaves' bare trees bare skies or grey overcast cold wrapping, trees stripped naked leaves litter cover ground, leaving leaf mould roots warming comforting protecting, to bless first new buds of spring opening, to clothe trees again in new gowns adorned growing :)

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M Asim Nehal 29 October 2015

Ya this year winter is crawling, soon we shall have chilling nights and foggy days... Amazing poem...10+++

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Sanjukta Nag 28 October 2015

Winter is coming slowly and it can be seen perfectly in your poem. A beautiful avatar of nature is portrayed here so beautifully. Each stanza is amazing.

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Liza Sudina 28 October 2015

Original that you see warmneth in winter, yes, this feeling of warmth becomes even more sharp in winter!

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Saheb Mohapatra 28 October 2015

you have nicely depicted the absolute coldness of the winter.....................yes winter is arriving silently and slowly and it has brought many white clothes with it for the nature................................excellent poem.......liked it.

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Saheb Mohapatra 28 October 2015

very nicely depicted the coldness of winter...........there is a great connectivity.........you have perfectly carried the topic to the end of this beautiful poem................greatly liked it.

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Valsa George 28 October 2015

Winter is arriving slowly, demanding the need to keep blankets ready! Enjoyed this poem on the seasonal change!

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Akhtar Jawad 27 October 2015

A beautiful symbolic poem, unlike trees snow of old age covers us slowly............................

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Jaishree Nair 27 October 2015

Winter season is approaching ready to spread its seasonal wisdom. Nice lines .Enjoyed .Thanks

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Kelly Kurt 27 October 2015

Winter does sneak up on us. Thanks, Kumarmani

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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