Saturday, October 18, 2008

Winter Is Coming............ Comments

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Children awaken me in the early light;
'Winter is coming' they shout in unison
'The leaves have danced off the limbs and the the trees are going to sleep, Mama.' says one.
'Winter is coming' claps two and three as they parade around on my bed
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Shala Drake
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Kate Richardson 18 October 2008

Such a lively poem. The voices of the children (and the mom) ring true. The control of line and imagery are wonderful. Thanks for sharing this.

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