Prophetic woes plummeting across places
I've seen this misery and fright drawn on faces.
Winter is coming as my pen dwelt,
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Very powerful and heart moving imagery! .. Ever so deeply expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++
Creeping under our feet, cold and devouring-----that is where my freezing starts--the feet on that cold cold ground--- very good choice of cold details in this poem---5 stars
I've seen this misery and fright drawn on faces.----these words plunged me right into the heart of this poem---a vivid sketch of the misery on their faces! excellent!
Thank Susan, as harsh as winter is, so is the situation we face on this planet, pandemic, wars...all kind of harsh viruses and the worse is yet to come!
Hi, lovely poem. I know how harsh winter can be, especially in South Africa, my nephew used to live there, at Cape Town. And I lived in Delhi for quite long. May I request you to please visit my poems, "A Winter in Delhi " and "The Doomsday Prophet ", on winter and Autumn, respectively
Indeed Unnikrishnan this is the winter of the world, i will take time and visit your poetry page man, thanks for the comment I hope Delhi is good!
Brilliant piece of poetry, thought provoking, clear, and focused. A nice creation embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Kyvin.
Excellent compilation of winter and feelings it brings to mind, it readily falls in line with what is going on in this world today. Amazing play on words, you have captured the winter of the world in this poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
All fell before my eyes...keen observation of natural disasters.. Your title invited me to go through this wonderful work... nicely put