Saturday, August 29, 2015

Winter Is Coming Comments

Rating: 5.0

Prophetic woes plummeting across places
I've seen this misery and fright drawn on faces.

Winter is coming as my pen dwelt,
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kyvin Nash
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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 April 2021

All fell before my eyes...keen observation of natural disasters.. Your title invited me to go through this wonderful work... nicely put

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Rebecca Navarre 17 April 2021

Very powerful and heart moving imagery! .. Ever so deeply expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Luo Zhihai 19 January 2021

Winter is coming. In fact, spring is not far away.

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kyvin nash 20 January 2021

Yeah Luo, we going Autumn soon this side...! ! !

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

Creeping under our feet, cold and devouring-----that is where my freezing starts--the feet on that cold cold ground--- very good choice of cold details in this poem---5 stars

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kyvin nash 12 January 2021

Indeed Susan, thank you for the 5 star rating!

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

I've seen this misery and fright drawn on faces.----these words plunged me right into the heart of this poem---a vivid sketch of the misery on their faces! excellent!

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kyvin nash 12 January 2021

Thank Susan, as harsh as winter is, so is the situation we face on this planet, pandemic, wars...all kind of harsh viruses and the worse is yet to come!

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Lyn Paul 10 January 2021

An excellent poem on the harshness of winter.

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kyvin nash 12 January 2021

Thank you Lyn Paul!

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 January 2021

Hi, lovely poem. I know how harsh winter can be, especially in South Africa, my nephew used to live there, at Cape Town. And I lived in Delhi for quite long. May I request you to please visit my poems, "A Winter in Delhi " and "The Doomsday Prophet ", on winter and Autumn, respectively

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kyvin nash 08 January 2021

Indeed Unnikrishnan this is the winter of the world, i will take time and visit your poetry page man, thanks for the comment I hope Delhi is good!

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Chinedu Dike 22 March 2018

Brilliant piece of poetry, thought provoking, clear, and focused. A nice creation embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Kyvin.

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Kyvin Nash 16 November 2018

Inspiring comment Mr Dike I'm houred.

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Roseann Shawiak 03 September 2015

Excellent compilation of winter and feelings it brings to mind, it readily falls in line with what is going on in this world today. Amazing play on words, you have captured the winter of the world in this poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Kyvin Nash 03 September 2015

Thank you Roseann yes its the winter of the world!

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Kyvin Nash 03 September 2015

Thanks guys its inspiration to hear your words!

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Kelly Kurt 29 August 2015

A wonderful, well written poem, Kyvin

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Kyvin Nash 03 September 2015

Thanks Kelly I'm inspired by your words I can only get better

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