Saturday, December 27, 2014

Winter In The Wind Comments

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The winter breeze blew
And the cold air threw its stream
Of chilled mist upon our shoulders
And rang in our ears
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Tony Adah
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Rajesh Thankappan 02 January 2015

Like Kim Barney I too am puzzled with the last two lines of the poem. Did you mean to say that the winter shall wipe away from the face of earth those unfortunate children?

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Kim Barney 02 January 2015

Nice. I am puzzled by the last statement, though, about winter leaving in a week's time. It lasts until the middle of March, right? And you posted the poem on December 27. Anyway, well written. (Here in Brazil it is summer until the middle of March.)

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