Monday, August 15, 2011

Winter In My Heart Comments

Rating: 4.5

The breeze that blows is the winter wind,
Freezing blood throughout my veins.
Instead of the warmth of your embrace,
I felt the shiver from your cold gaze.
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diana rose tolentino
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Saadat Tahir 29 September 2016

a poem drenched in wistful separation.... a painful realization of the harsh realities of unmet love liked

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Wilma De Guzman 12 August 2016

The same love that''s gone before it began. I like this line it pictures a love started but soon gone immediately!

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Queen Oneeightytwo 25 August 2011

I understand, as I've watched love sift through my open hand reaching out to him...Sending you Light and Love and Healing from Above! Wonderful write! : ]

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Ency Bearis 19 August 2011

great metaphor and profound poem, well penned

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Eric Cockrell 15 August 2011

that winter feels both cold and desolate... but has in it the beginnings of spring...you paint your emotions well. good poem!

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