Winter Haiku Comments
As the snowman stands
Children go for a hot coco
Watching the snow fall
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We don't have any snow in Lahore. But I have a dream it might snow here some day. Beautifully penned!
Excellent. This is how children enjoy the winter! Nice haiku. Top score
Being fastened to the sit, watching a hot coco.... well done...
Makes me cold and warm at the same time. Cool deal. Thanks, dear LeeAnn
Very nice, LeeAnn. Give the snowman a cup of cocoa. That'll warm him up.
Interesting contrasts, the snowman stays to be cold, the children go to be warmed, through it all the snow continues to come... I love it.
It put a huge smile on my face, as I reminisced of that ancient time. THX for the memories, LeeAnn.
A beautiful haiku. Well penned dear poetess LeeAnn. Top score.
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8/7/2025 12:15:06 PM # 1.0.0
Ohh, Such a beautifully heartwarming and tender image of Christmas! .. Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++