Sunday, November 30, 2008

Winter (Haiku) Comments

Rating: 4.8

A Shadow of hard stone
shivers in the soft water
Icy winter night.
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Dr Hitesh Sheth
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Elle_leila 14 August 2022

I was wondering were you'd gotten the illustration from?

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ALL OF IT WERE GOOD..TRY MY SENRYU'S TOO

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a wonderful poem with vivid images..10++++ Womanly winter fails to cool off smouldering passion

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Womanly winter fails to cool off smouldering passion how much your thinking power goes!

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Sandra Fowler 27 April 2009

Beautiful write, Dr. Sheth. Snowflakes are always falling in my soul. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 April 2009

I loved this poem.If you're not too busy could you read 'Reflection'

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Catrina Heart 29 March 2009

a nice winter poem, a deep provoking verses entwined....10

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Kesav Easwaran 24 February 2009

good imageries...nice haiku combo, Hitesh...10

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Vinod Kumar 25 December 2008

A winter snowfall....in my mind in the spring, Well done dear Dr.

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Deepti Agarwal 04 December 2008

good personification of winter here.. :)

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Tsira Goge 04 December 2008

Womanly winter fails to cool off smouldering passion. ................................ Remarkable picture about winter in women.... Hitesh,10... from my. Best wishes, Tsira Tsira

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 04 December 2008

profound.............beautiful, thanks for sharing

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Kite Remedy 01 December 2008

that's short yet meaningful phrases.. deeply affects me.. great..

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Anjali Sinha 01 December 2008

'Womanly winter fails to cool off smouldering passion ' I like the winters semblance to woman and also the 'smouldering passion' great haiku A+ and 10+ goes to my fav list regards anju

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Reshma Ramesh 30 November 2008

superb...............well done! !

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