Wednesday, September 24, 2008

Winter Glow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Up to the sky
Past all the abyss
Here a fly buzz by
Seeing you brings bliss
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Adam Day
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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 March 2019

Here a fly buzz of bliss is motivated and we feel the expression. Mere saint's charm is virtue. Winter snow flakes are falling and air is rising. We are hearing sweet sound and this is completely motivating us. The endless glow is perfectly felt. You have nicely written this excellent poem...10

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David Threadgold 24 September 2008

Hi Adam. Great descriptive picture of a winters glow. thanks for the read regards Dave T.

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