Saturday, June 4, 2005

Winter Beauty Comments

Rating: 3.3

The bleak of winter leaves me among despair
Thier is only anger and chill in the air
No happiness or laughing
Just grey clouds and bleak white sky
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Rachel Weaver
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Uriah Hamilton 04 June 2005

Real promise for such a young writer! you don't need the word thou. Please stick with the writing!

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