Saturday, December 5, 2015

Winter And The End Of The Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

A crouching sleep in cold under a blanket
Shortens the night in an unseen dream
A longing hope in solitary fight
Suffers from that never come to calm
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Udaya R. Tennakoon
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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 December 2015

Beautiful winter dream that provides own space, though in illusion, to the dreamer which he can not secure due to push and pulls of life in reality. Dream acts like an elixir and give renewed vitality to a soul worn out by struggle for existence. Nice theme. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Udaya R. Tennakoon

Udaya R. Tennakoon

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