Winter And Its Effects Comments

Yes, you are a great writer. You should expand and write a story. Using the cold as a metaphor for anxiety was brilliant. Yes, anxiety shuts me up in my room to and keeps me from accomplishing the things I want to accomplish, as well as dating or at times just going out and having fun

'I hate the way it makes my skin pale and waxy The way my scars pop with contrast Against the back of my hands I hate the cold because I feel fragile, Like old china' Quite beautiful description and use of poetic devices... Thanks for sharing...