Sunday, January 13, 2013

Winter Afternoon Comments

Rating: 5.0

In snow-covered backyard, garden is without bloom,
Lonely is my heart and silence pervades the room.

Wind is forgetful today,
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Savita Tyagi
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Kathansh 03 May 2018

Iam not getting required poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2017

This is so beautiful poem on nature and winter having haunting expression and nice diction. Alive depiction. Let me quote... Time is in prison today, hourglass broken The bird is caged in here emotions fenced Hearth is cluttered and fire burned out Dancing shadows from yonder land Beaming upon television Breathe not life in still room Yet the crisp cool richness of afternoon Invites me calmly... Thanks for sharing this gem.10

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Savita Tyagi 29 October 2017

Thank you so much for your kind remarks.

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Bri Edwards 19 September 2015

my favorite lines are, perhaps, the first two and the last two. The bird is caged in here emotions fenced................ here or her............ i honesty don't know! a well-placed comma would help me. :) this poem is very unique (for me) so far. i would not write like this probably, but I like it! i won't try to explain. though i don't know for sure what is being said, and it has (very) little rhyming, and NO humor/humour, i am still compelled to add this to MyPoemList. bri :)

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