Thursday, November 12, 2009

Winter (A Lanturne Poem.) Comments

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.......Frost
....Sparkles
...Over earth
.The winter is
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J.A McManus
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Clara Odelia Ciutara 15 November 2009

It is a simple poem. You described it well as the lantern one. This is a nice poem

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R. H. Peat 14 November 2009

I like the lantern form. It has been some time since I tried one. Thanx for reminding me. Great job by the way. Very Haiku sounding poem. a poet friend RH Peat

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Obinna Eruchie 13 November 2009

You did a good job of describing the winter in a terse way.

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Sandra Martyres 12 November 2009

A lovely poem...compressed into a few words...

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J.A McManus

J.A McManus

Carlisle, Cumbria
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