.......Frost
....Sparkles
...Over earth
.The winter is
...
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I like the lantern form. It has been some time since I tried one. Thanx for reminding me. Great job by the way. Very Haiku sounding poem. a poet friend RH Peat
You did a good job of describing the winter in a terse way.
It is a simple poem. You described it well as the lantern one. This is a nice poem