Thursday, October 19, 2006

Winter (A Haiku) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Winter at its peak
Snow flakes meandering down
Everything turns ‘white’.
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Peter A. Crowther 16 December 2006

I love 'meandering'; it is the perfect word choice here

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Reuben Matthew 06 November 2006

a lovely haiku. i like the use of the word ' 'white' '. one word is capable of multiple connotations. Reuben.

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