Thursday, June 21, 2007

Winter Comments

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You can sense dread in the trees as winter approaches.
With it’s freezing temperatures, and robbing of the sunlight.
With it’s chilling winds, and blinding storms.
And yet when I look to winter all I see is the beautiful new fallen snow, and the crystals hanging off the sleeping trees.
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Shannon Greenwald
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Katherine Wiley 22 January 2008

Very nicely worded poem about winter. I find winter exciting because of the cold refreshing air and the beauty of snow. Nice work. Kate

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Ben Gieske 02 November 2007

I like 'the sleeping trees' and the 'passion that is winter'. Whose passion? Winter's or ours or both.

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