Monday, December 5, 2016

Winter Comments

Rating: 4.6

Winter in hot countries is a natural gift,
Takes dirt and sweats gives a silky sift,
I'm afraid of her hysteria in heat,
During hot summers, it's often a rift,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Hans Vr 10 December 2016

Beautiful, heart warming and lovely to read. Superb rhymes.

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Hazel Durham 07 December 2016

Great rhyming and a beautiful write!

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Valsa George 06 December 2016

It will be so cozy to be under a blanket during mild winter....! Yes, the blistering heat can drive anyone crazy! Lovely poem with a lovely picture!

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Rajnish Manga 06 December 2016

This poem written in the form of a Ghazal brings shivers with its title but as we move further, we get to have the warmth in an otherwise hostile season. Thanks for sharing.

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Khalid Saifullah 06 December 2016

Such a beautiful poem with lovely rhymes..............................

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M Asim Nehal 06 December 2016

Very true, it is blessing in disguise and nature is fair to everyone, every place......Profound poem, Janab.10

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