Saturday, February 16, 2013

Winter Comments

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The high-wires on telephone poles
are covered in sleepy snow;
the passing electricity
moves through them quietly and slow -
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Smoky Hoss
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Joseph Anderson 07 March 2013

What a great metaphor for winter-NATURES ANNUAL TREASON. A great summing up of winter. Come on, convert to rhyme, cause you are good at it

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Valerie Dohren 23 February 2013

Another great write Smoky, so descriptive of Winter - lovely.

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Heather Wilson 20 February 2013

An apt and beautiful description of Winter, Smoky, loved, Nature`s annual treason, let`s hope Spring will soon find its way here.

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Patti Masterman 18 February 2013

Yes; love your rhymin', Mr. Smoky Hoss ;)

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