Thursday, April 23, 2009

Winter Comments

Rating: 4.5

White perfect arctic crystals,
Blowing in on a boreal wind,
Whispering gently as it carries
Earth’s blanket to warm it
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Tyler Smith
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Danielle Martens 27 April 2009

The last line is great. It's the turn, like the volta. Only without the sonnet and it's actually amusing.

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SAM Mitsuki 27 April 2009

Beautiful descrpitions...I really loved the last line it caught me off guard and made me laugh.

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