Friday, July 3, 2009

Winnow The Day. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Surging with eagle wings
Day carries weight.
Watch 'Choice' standing
Legs astride
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Fay Slimm
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Patti Masterman 29 October 2009

Loved the choice of words in here; made it feel so regally fresh and exciting..(smile)

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Bob Blackwell 16 July 2009

Fay, each day we have to choose between one or other thing, but its fun to throw the chaff and watch fly away in wind. A short but meaningful poem. Love Bobx

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Shashendra Amalshan 10 July 2009

hello fay! ! ! this again is a nice, beautiful write indeed! ! ! 'We winnow well Who sift chaff from grain, Then, hands high, In day's light, Send chaff flying' i like your word play.. very refreshing write indeed, ,10++ with love shan .

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Carol Gall 03 July 2009

lov the images you provide beautiful a good feeling

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Tom Balch 03 July 2009

lovely images, lovely piece Fay,10 from Tom

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Fay Slimm

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