Winning The Heart Comments
Ever thought of winning the heart
By putting a dagger on the chest?
- Should be a unique experiment
Moulded in medieval adventurism
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A satire at its best. I liked the very concept of winning hearts, dragger dipped in honey and with all sweet and melodious talks inserted like giving anesthesia to patient. The end result will be " Left alone" to live. Superb poem Rajnish ji. A thought provoking poem.
I have missed you on PH for such a long time, Asim ji. Thanks for being on this page with a fine review and kind words of appreciation.
Ahh... very strange and thought provoking question indeed. 'Could it be a win-win situation On either side of the divide ever? '... is excellent.10+++
My sincere thanks to you, Dear Anil ji, for taking time to read this poem and for having found it plausible. Your support means a lot to me.
By putting a dagger on the chest? ......brilliantly penned. It provides a new sense. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.
Thanks for your kind and appreciative words. 'It provides a new sense' yes, I meant it to carry some covert message.
No hearts ever are won by a dagger, nor yet even by a beggar, it happens when both the hearts eager but you need a good enough jeegar (Hindi) ! ! !
Sweet and very sensible one. This has been the common resolve of the lovers the world over. However, there are some who fiddle with the opposite. Thanks, Dear Aniruddha ji.
I sincerely appreciate it. A very thoughtful comment. Thanks a lot.
I wonder, is it win/win or lose/lose? The meaning challenges me.
Yes, it is a lose-lose situation, win-win is far fetched for those who force their will on others in the hope that everything will be alright in the end.
THIS IS A VERY GOOD RIDER LIKE A GUY WANTING TO SWIM IN A RIVER ALONG SIDE WITH HER BUT PULLS TO DROWN WHO BOTH AS IN UNREQUITED LOVE RM SIR NEWER KINDA POETRY COMING FROM YOU
Yours is indeed a very thoughtful analysis. Reader should be at liberty to draw conclusions. Thanks, Dear Poet Sir.
The win-win situation can be possible when life will be measured with mutual love and respect. This poem is very brilliantly penned with definite expression...10
How balanced and beautiful observation you have made, Kumarmani ji. Mutual love and respect should form the basis of a lasting relationship- any sphere. Thanks a lot, Sir.
Success should be guided with the muse of the truth! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Quite a sensible line of action to clinch the point. Thanks and regards.
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7/28/2025 11:20:01 AM # 1.0.0
Hearts and dagger that takes you back into the Medieval era where it is either victory through heroism or else it is a sacrifice or death. But love is always the winner for the tender hearts in love......An excellent 6 liner verse that tells an old story with tremendous new vitality........Thank you Rajnish ji.....10
I sincerely thank you for a fine review of the poem. Though, I have taken cues from the past, the drama is being enacted today in our very own 'Firdaus' on Earth. Thank you so much, Geeta ji.