Winners Song (Varsha Madhulika......Edited By Deluke Muwanigwa With Permission) Comments

this is a very good poem about vocationI knew a girl with similar invocation she wanted to be a lover of some one not in her minds occupation but delivered a child in a life of suffocation imaging twas a life brought i by genetic migration of thoughts of her lover who could never marry her bornwas she on 19 oct 1983 perhaps if i correctly remember life has gone down the memories lane as it rained

This is why editing and building vocabulary matters most. Thank-you bro for making my poetry look even more beautiful and in fact you inspired me to always give a second read to one's own creation to make it look even more better. I never do that. Thank-you.

And this is explicitly beautiful. Inspiring me to put on little more effort and attention to poetry world sifting beautiful thoughts under the spell of words. Very beautifully written bro. Great admirations.