Wednesday, August 26, 2020

Winner's Song Comments

Rating: 4.6

Nursing was never her desire
Life was not happy to give her another offer
Failure was what haunted her
Amidst all that was dipped in brilliance.
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Chinedu Dike 01 July 2021

Profound, philosophical rendition set aside for deep reflective thought...

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M Asim Nehal 30 December 2020

One of your best poem. Inspiring.5**

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Akhtar Jawad 16 December 2020

Beauty of achievement shine, a beautiful poem by a lovely poetess.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 December 2020

It's a great poem from your pen. I take a chance to read this poem again. This work takes me to a world where a noble lady like Mother Teresa preferred to dwell. That single name is sufficient enough to interpret this poem from all dimensions. Beautifully put..Top score.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 December 2020

Such a beautiful poem! Just beautiful... Top score

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 November 2020

Life of satisfaction is not what I am against But life of passion that rules my head Visualizing my passion to parent Impossible it became to breath abreast. very fine expressions. desire, wishes disappointments and impossibility that one might experience. lovely poem.. tony

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Terry Craddock 06 October 2020

I wrote the poem 'A Failure Fear An Exceptionally Wonderful Motivator' inspired by the poem 'Winner's Song' by the poet Varsha Madhulika and dedicated to Varsha Madhulika.

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Terry Craddock 04 October 2020

'Nursing was never her desire Life was not happy to give her another offer Failure was what haunted her Amidst all that was dipped in brilliance.' Varsha you had me hooked on this poem from the first stanza, and if your still nursing I already know your nurturing nature, the haunting fear of failure was a giveaway, a fear of failure is an exceptionally wonderful motivator for success. I so enjoyed this poem, perhaps I should one day tell you my first no desire career option.

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Waliur Rahman 24 September 2020

" Dreams are rich man's chattel" Still engrossed in the multilayered meaning of this line. The poem exalts a journey to a mood inexpressible. Simply beautiful.

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Kezia Kezia 22 September 2020

very nice thougths.. gob bless u dear Varsha

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 September 2020

Injustice labored all to break her down Bowed head of her wore the crown As she served the sick with a smile Even though she never desired to be a nurse. Ultimately becomes what you are supposed to be. a bold determination and audacity. tony

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Suresh Kumar Ek 17 September 2020

Varsha dear, You are destined to be a great poet And nurse the humanity forever

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 September 2020

difficulties everywhere seemingly this is world, full natural difficulty creates human only nature lives on its own ways so, only human can defeat this difficulty for the imprudence of predecessors successors face the difficulties so, those have the confidence and inner power to win the desired goal only they can reach there successfully

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 September 2020

Never she gave up to the suppressing call Donned she in the shoes of life's will Erasing all that she script whole Until she became a blank scroll. ......the confidence and inner strength of marching ahead always encourages any person to fulfill own dream; almost every confident struggle heart win the expected the golden deer of life; the poet very perfected delineated this theme through this beautiful poem; congrats for being selected this poem as POD...10+

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Deluke Muwanigwa 05 September 2020

Ultimately becomes her winner's song. Boom! Title wraps up the whole poem.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 05 September 2020

Its good. You should made me aware of PH before 16.10.19 we would have collabo ed on this one. (Umm...don't ask me how i don't know) . I sense this is a personal poem and nobody messes with personal stuff......except me your brother. So i will not say nothing. Its a comment of nothingness saying nothing. And if Deluke Muwanigwa irritates you Just ignore him and write something new

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Deluke Muwanigwa 05 September 2020

Its good. You should made me aware of PH before 16.10.19 we would have collabo ed on this one. (Umm...don't ask me how i don't know) . I sense this is a personal poem and nobody messes with personal stuff......except me your brother. So i will not say nothing. Its a comment of nothingness saying nothing. And if Deluke Muwanigwa irritates you Just ignore him and write another.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 September 2020

A well crafted poem of the day. Truly marvelous....10++

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Indira Renganathan 05 September 2020

Passion and perseverance should go hand in hand....failures are all obstacles for us to cross over...also success is not an easy fruit for us to enjoy...and there is this biggest villain called fate who can oppress one to an unfathomable depth...this invisible fate is in the hands of the invisible supreme power....prayer and time alone will answer or heal any woe in this world...kudos Varsha, , , each line is adorable

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2020

10.Very nice poem.. I loved it, clear 10 Nurses-Thanks Sunday, September 6,2020 6: 44 AM Corona has proved it again " Corona warriors" the name is given Many have sacrificed their lives We not only pay our tribute but believe in their noble role too Dr Jadia Hasmukh

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