Friday, July 6, 2012
Wings Within Comments
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Thread of dots
Merged with words;
Words painted with imaginations
By the paint brushes of an unchained soul;
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Lisa Zhao
12 July 2012
i honestly love your message, its very deep and inspiring, but i agree with nitijita, maybe you could make it a bit more poetic
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Nitijita Mishra
06 July 2012
nice thought...nice choice of words.. :) bt try to make it sound more poetic...
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7/20/2025 10:29:13 AM # 1.0.0
A good poem with beautiful words..kp