Likely in cloudy and foggy weather,
Hanging in branches of trees
Under green leaves a dream of joy,
In forest as deer hears song of hunter,
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A masterly crafted spiritual and insightful write. It expresses in detail how to achieve eternal and righteous freedom. A great piece that gives wisdom.10
Yes, some of our vices are like spider webs, but with one difference. While spider webs are for trapping insects, our vices trap us and make us entangled! It is then difficult to free ourselves! Only by getting rid of those vices and practising virtues like love, kindness and forgiveness, one can enjoy true freedom! An insightful write!
An insightful, deep and profound poem to be pondered on. Well executed sir Kumar.10
As one takes birth in this world he is a pure and sublime soul. Once he feels the physical hunger, to pacify it he uses all his senses and in the process forgets what is right and what is wrong. Only learned men can do it and live a life of peace. Very nice poem. Enjoyed from beginning to the end. Thanks for posting.10++++++++
The Lord Himself woke him up from the illusion.The story is perhaps to remind us that in this world our five senses may tempt us to go in the wrong direction and this temptation is too high to resist.
A deep spiritual write- - - - This world is 'Maya or illusion in Hindu philosophy.After coming to the earth the man forgets his source and gets entrapped in this illusion.As the story in Mahabharat goes, the great sage NARADA MUNI who always chants Lord Visnu's names, also fell for the Maya and forgot his Lord during the period(contd) .
Oh dear soul, you are conscious self luminous light / Recognize yourself and awaken self to drive body, / You are eternal child of God and you have purpose, - - - - - - - - ] love those lush words like luminous and awaken. This poem is so totally in the will of God. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Your writing brings me joy. An understanding (to a point) of one from far away; but still a fellow human.
I understand the meter used through spider, you masterfully made truth, vices destroy, attachment and ego gives illusion around person pursuing such, a great poem! ! persue virtues 10
He opens eyes and sees changing beauty, But gradually wings of illusion capture him, Senses motivate him and he runs behind matters, By mistake he thinks himself as a human body, Although he drives this body and he is energy, Forgetting that he is consciousness... a fine philosophical poem so much of thinking has gone into this poem.. thank u dear poet Kumaramani. Mahakul. it is always a joy to read you. thank u. tony
nice one, , , clear 10 an illusion creates confusion but there is no compulsion you have strong resolve and can easily solve