Thursday, July 1, 2010

*wings Of Consciousness Comments

Rating: 2.7

Under the pale moon light,
I shall kiss you a thousand times;
Under the waxen clouds,
Slowly walking on the blanket of stars,
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Catrina Heart
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Kesav Easwaran 12 July 2010

free-flowing poetic wings very much eloquent, Cathy...10

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Eyan Desir 04 July 2010

Well i have always said your work is good enough to be publish... it's amazing. how you control your lines great wording mixes with a feminine touch well grooved.......

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Jean Dament 01 July 2010

A lovely poem with it's great descriptions & expressions in a easy natural flow. I especially liked the last verse & last line. Well versed. 'blessed'-should be 'bless' ok Spiritsong

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Jean Dament 01 July 2010

A lovely love poem with it's great natural flow of descriptions & expressions of being one with another. Well done & a joy to read. Spiritsong

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