Wednesday, August 5, 2009

Wings Like That Comments

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Wings like that me lift off the ground
Love your that my spins head around
Up when I’m I want never to come down.
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Kasey Graham 26 June 2010

I take back my previous comments, ... THIS one is my very favorite! ! ! I loved, loved, loved it! ! ! Amazing play on words, .. the muddled order gives great passion to the sentiments expressed. Felt like 15 and in love again for the first time!

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Bele Lele 12 August 2009

The first stanza is my favourite, good poem 10+

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