Wings Into The Rain Comments

as the darkness may go higher as hue into the hills reeling its head heaved in its room of black Silurian fossil. to the delve into the glimpse of my love even from the flames of fire yet undeterred......it is pure love that demands such sacrifice and outsopen ness.. beautifully expressed in words.....10 read mine sun sets in..... miss i miss u.... a place called home..not all dream comes true

''when riding like a cowboy in drunk ness as a lonely bird over the oceanic waves looking into the moonlit night yet alone flapping its wings in to the reek of rain.'' I like this simile....wonderful poem..10++++++++++

The outspan of these wings must surely be by 10.. One Peace at a time...

its a beautiful love seal that way its go to be.....as a blessed by his golden grace of my cherished deep within hearts there's whisper and the whisper of the words are true. Nice penned, Mary

Love will take each on this quest. Wonderful write Dr Kar! A (10) ! Thad

'silence may speckle into wee hours' - fabulous