Wednesday, February 7, 2007

Wings (If I Were A Bird...) Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I were a bird I would fly
Off into infinity...
And of man have no fear
or need
...
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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
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Katherine Wiley 27 January 2008

Dorothy-wonderful poem. I have often wished the same. Your last two lines are very deep. I would say great, and quotable! My mother used to sing a little song called Little Sparrow-'I wish I were a little sparrow, and I had wings and I could fly'. Really enjoyed your poem. Kate

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Jack Tex 28 March 2007

Two thumbs up. Just like what Jenny said in the movie 'Forrest Gump'.

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Jerry Hughes 08 February 2007

...ah, but you'd have the wind beneath them, lucky bird

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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