Friday, January 27, 2012

Wings Discarded On A Headland, Found Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wings discarded on a headland, found;
On coarse rock clean and worn
Honeycombed salty bitter, fragmented
Wrenched by the rowing sea
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Danny Draper
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Captain Cur 17 March 2013

A fall and resurrection. Admiral poem, strongly written and the ryhme did not overcome the meaning as sometimes happens in verse. It begins with death and decay, then with power and purpose, and ends, in the poets own words, free at last, free at last, free at last.

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Karen Deeks 14 March 2012

Honeycombed, bitter salted and the rowing sea are just exceptional lines indeed... This although covering the final moments before decomposing (love that word, says so much) the beautiful decline of what once was... This is one of my favourites I've read in a while as an ode to bygone importance (ruffled feathers) ... Inspirational, this encourages so many passages of thought...harmony in words.. Karen

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Dave Walker 29 February 2012

A very beautiful poem, really like it. Everything in life living or dead strives to be free. A really fantastic write.

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