Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Wings Comments

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I always had wings
Only my soul could see
They took me to worlds above
To new orbits of glory
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Nikunj Sharma
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Anjali Sinha 03 July 2009

Not only your soul could see But others here have seen That you could fly High above the skies Where no one ever reached And now we hope That all your unfinished dreams Don’t remain just dreams That all your tasks are done And words unspoken Are understood-- And all your works fulfilled May all your dreams come true-- Tis my only prayer for you Anjali

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Deborah Cromer 01 July 2009

I love this poem. I have been reading some of your other works, and I can tell you are very clever! Thank you for inviting me to read! Deborah Cromer

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Surya . 23 June 2009

a chd is a fully grown man in an invalid body. beautifull thoughts.well penned voted10 surya

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Priyanka Bhowmick 23 June 2009

every1 got their wings.. only depends upon time, luck n us, when we'll get to fly... a very good poem portrayed on the subject.,

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