Sunday, August 7, 2005

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I drew them back to the origins
of our love
I’d once known
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Tears In Rain
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Velvet Thorn 07 September 2005

phantom memories of our pasts whisper by cradled like tears in our eyes These are my favorite lines it the poem.

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Lylyanna Pilewski 07 August 2005

touching too little or too much much too late promise broken like a plate I loved those lines awesome write. Lylyanna

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