Sunday, November 17, 2019

Wings Comments

Rating: 5.0

Whirling and dancing in limitless air,
One little, red leaf floated solitaire.
So sun-kissed, perky and full of grace;
Too soon it was far from its birthplace!
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Terry Craddock 26 November 2020

'Whirling and dancing in limitless air, One little, red leaf floated solitaire. So sun-kissed, perky and full of grace; ' a perfect 1st,2nd and 3rd stanza, from a surprise perfect start to a surprise perfect finish enchanting, delightful, wonderful, an inspiring delightful tale told an a magical cute tale of a fly high away leaf :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 June 2020

" Little Leaf, " said God, " How do you fly, For such a great distance, and so very high? " " Upon a poet's wings, " the little one said. And with a cute little spin, away he sped! . really beautiful poem indeed. tony

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