Wing Our Loves Over Their Hearts (Ft Ellias) Comments

Although we are tired to hear those words still representation and repeating fall in ears. Living in the cage, they set our boundaries. Opposite sites are amazingly mysterious to perceive. Existence of love still motivates mind and invisible love embraces life. Voice echos and fear remains. But love overcomes fear and gives joy. Looking at open sky we realize God's creation. God's grace falls on us at each moment. Holding love in hand to make world survives is wise ever. Excellent poem is shared.10

no you are not in cages, you are in a plain ground there you can extend your love see the air blowing it will carry your wishes where you want when you want and to whom you want but when you going to make this with political face this face have many colours. politics starts from politicians and policies the heart of politicians are imbibed with many things and eventhou they have the love and peace mind to be recognized in this earth they playing many games there they are going to forget their originity so their policies and political decisions make them to over come human values and they are stick to some thing to destroy the human feelings and rights hence they ignored the importance of the child child birth and male and female comparision when they are sick to some ideas or opinions most of them will not think about the bad out comings so peace will always there as the word as we express it. because all the creature in this earth looking for it because no body really do not have it so peace be the word from the merciful lord as quran express it ok i read some the lines from your poem because i have a lack of time to go thru all the lines because it is too big so next i will look for the time and will go thru it any have thanks for good work and a day you will be recognized by the world people for the humble work whenver where ever you go high i will be there to prayer with allah to grow you more have a nice day yours onle au

Every word is true, but on the other side we can see that everybody has to learn a lesson and some people can learn only through tragedy, like I did. I am happy I went through starvation, wars, dead bodies, because this way I can appreciate the good life better. Every second of my life is a thanksgiving to God that He gave me those terrible things and I could come out better from them. Some people have good life and still they are full with fear, worry, blame, and judgement, never have enough and so on.

marvellous is only world fr yr poem!

I highly appreciate your concern. We all hate war and love peace but still war ravages civilization. Lovely poem

This is one of those poems one can call perfect. This is beautiful, touching with a powerful message behind. Lovely :)

intelligent writing skill! Multi dimensional views. very inspirational too.

I can relate to the feelin of being in 'a one big cage', . Admired yor brill musin epic!

The beauty of life is in the waiting. Hope surviving amidst the wasteland of hate and selfish politics is definitely a humanistic endeavour. Nice poem

You worked so well with Elias...Your poetry have good rhyme and also very meaningful...well done soul.

This poetic discourse of beautiful, compassionate and inspirational thoughts on the future of our world heightens the awareness of the reader and all who are concerned. Our hearts are for a positive outcome concerning such touching matters. Beautifully done. Thank you Soul.

Soul has made an introspection of Love here and decorated it with lovely ornaments(his thoughts) and made it visible for all of us, the true essence of love and life.Great work. I really love the philosophy behind it :)

Existence of love is nothing but to embrace life' I agree with you. there are some person in PH family whom i can never forget. you r one of them. u r my unwritten friend. xlent write.

'Existence of love is nothing but to embrace life'............................... magical write.......amazing idea

How beautifully said! If only I could hold my hand with you to wait for love and smiles to be spread. Meanwhile I write the same with you trying to wake myself, to be aware to learn of ways peace could be brought..

My great friend, my dear brother, I've never read such an amazing write, or seen sech a beautiful picture, you know that you're the best poet here to me, and you prove that to me day after day. May Allah bless you my brother :)

My Dear Soul, even though you and young Ellias are trying to put me out of the pirate business with this fine write, there is alway the poetry business. Is there much gold in poetry? All kidding aside love this write between two fine minds. Beautiful message expressed here.

Who cares? If you even need to ask that question, then you know something is wrong. Just when we think life is to bleak to bare, my dear Soul brings back light and hope to my soul. Putting light back into the shadows. More people thinking the way of our dear Soul would be a beautiful world to share. In my humble opinion.

Yes. Wing our loves over their hearts! Wing our pen to free the minds with scars! Good work!

Impregnating deliveries in the labyrinths and interlaced well with ideas and concepts.War is a wall that has to be broken with haste.Overall its compact and it worked on its own.