Tuesday, March 20, 2007

Wine To Water Comments

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My vision was blurred, distorted.
Broken by the glass,
The drink that I was pouring was always going to be my last.
His hands came down and held me,
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David Daykin
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Miss Starrbox 26 March 2007

I like the fact that you can turn simple words into something very meaningful and i like your spiritual point of view as well. Good poem. :)

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