Oh!
Wight of puny might
Junk the junk food
it’s dynamite
...
Read full text
well made and drawn in poetic sense............clueful...........
Poetic dos and do nots by a medico. Well penned. Ten. dr.sakti Cordially invite to read the unread poems and post comment and or criticism.
Well said...A very good way of explaining as Christ put it 'The kingdom is within you'...
very nice way of looking at your body as being the holy temple of GOD, , and explaining all of the things that defile and corrupt His temple that was given to you. nice job! 10+++
Anjali: Enjoyed this poem tremendously and feel it will be very helpful to all who read it. Good write and good health to you. Your friend Lynn
your subject is no doubt amazing one. I appreciate your thinking: You criticize Bacchus in your poem, I spread, every nook and corner, your name.
But when a man of vision performs yoga in all seasons, that suffuses his cells with rejuvenating divine oxygen; means yoga cant help women....ha ha ha.... nice poem and interesting subject chosen....keep it up......
This poem must be given along with prescription by each doc as mandatory procedure! ! Quite a sensible, enlightening one. Kushal
i guess i commented on this helthy poem too..again an excellent poem it remain..
for depression cannot be hidden in whirls of smoke nor anxiety cannot be shrouded by a joint of coke. Nor Alcohol can dissolve the molecules of stress Nor amphetamine can give you an ace in race. on world no tobacco day... wonderful very well written... a caring poetry with a cause great hope a lot of others read it too... a pro bono publico message its atenner cheers
Nice and cool poem with positive approach towards life/mankind. Love it.
Excellent advice on good health put together with class ++++++10 I have a personal trainer Yoga teacher 1hr walk before brekky vegi food........my wife! OMG the dog an I are so fit, thanks for the great read as always regards
Great poem, great advice, fortunately I have already tried both roads to excess, through the practise of the last two stanza's, I find myself with an excess of.........happiness and bliss. ! 0/10 Bob
What a sensible and creatively message this is. Loved your clever language through the romp of sense and sensibility! A ten from me!
What a sensible and creatively message this is. Loved your clever language through the romp of sense and sensibility! A ten from me!
Lovely! Liked it immensely. expressing a caring sentiment.10
Beautifully thought out and expressed. A cure for mind, body and soul :) Thank you for sharing. A 10 for health reasons also :)
captivating piece, true and thoughtful, thanks for sharing 10
Anjali thou art writing about me..I'm married to a yoga teacher..I eat all my veggies up, I don't eat animals, I'm a happy sod and believe me it pays...to be healthy and retired is a gift from.. God but your poem is right you have to work for it....regards if thy are about.