Wine In Goblets Served Comments
I am a wanton butterfly.
With Aurora, I start my day
on viewless wings I float by
sucking honey from floral cups
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They are the poems blooming in the fertile imagination A great poem on poetry.
hey, valsa! i enjoyed this. there are several phrases that particularly stand out- viewless wings floral cups balm applied on reeking wounds as bubbling wine in goblets served. i'm reminded that sometimes we see, we meet God in other people- the God who is Love. and if you haven't already read and perhaps commented on my piece, one poem, it's one i wrote with the poems and poetry in poemhunter in mind. glen
Thank you so much Glen for your analytical review of my poem! The poem you have mentioned is already read and commented on earlier!
Like this lovely poem which brought me much delight Got all my senses tingling till the morning light Thank you wanton butterfly for this fantastic write
These lovely words are indeed a delight Sweeter than honey they taste Oh..I am lifted to the sky forthright Thank you so much... Loke!
How poetry enriches the soul deeply...to read and to write. I flew with your butterfly seeking and tasting those poems...and I too have found the most precious of gems penned so exquisitely from your pen. Those poems that swing you from the highest beams or throw you into the deepest profound sadness and I understand the hunger that returns ferociously.
What a beautiful comment you have written of the poem...Simone! If you found my poems exquisite, it is a great honor for me and I can be proud that I am a poet! While writing the poem, definitely I had in mind your poems too! Thank you so much for all the encouragement you are giving me always! I feel obliged!
They are the poems blooming in the fertile imagination of the blessed bards of this site They relieve me of my anguish Nicely conveyed the truth.These interactions are indeed so valuable. Every poem read and every comment made inspires one to create more.
Wow! An amazing and so creative tribute to poetry and poets. Filled my goblet of great poetry reading to rim. Thank you Valsa for sharing such a wonderful poem.
A lovely tribute to poetry. How badly we all need it. These beautiful moments of reading each other's thoughts, to let go of the mundane, monotonous reality of daily life to share with each other the blossoms of our minds, these moments are indeed precious n unforgettable. Very well expressed feelings. I agree completely. A 10.
Wow... amazing what poetry could do to the reader. Beautiful rendition, Valsa. Thanks for expressing your poem in such a way.
Wonderful imaginary on composing a metaphorical poem on poems amusingly giving a title 'Wine In Goblets Served '.Whole poem is on stunning and thrilling expression. Wine is supposed to be the poems of blessed bards.. . I want to quote some lines here... They are the poems blooming in the fertile imagination of the blessed bards of this site They relieve me of my anguish like balm applied on reeking wounds They draw me in with the magic of their songs rock me on a swing, lifting me up and down sometimes they make me inebriated as bubbling wine in goblets served. Thanks for sharing.
Wonderful imaginary on composing a metaphorical poem on poems amusingly giving a title 'Wine In Goblets Served '.
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7/27/2025 1:57:29 AM # 1.0.0
Again this is more than extraordinary.......Valsa.......even when an infant, and in your cradle, you had a soul for poetry or else such a composition would have been impossible......Great imagination and great creativity....Full credit