Gushing, as suddenly breeze turns to spite
And spits rain, here, once again unremitting,
A precursor to dour grey, it looks quite
Stormy. As prelude befitting, I sit
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Oh yes! This is brilliant... we can weather any storm. Great write from a great poet 10/10 - incredible my friend: -)
Some excellent figurative language here; '...breeze turns to spite/ And spits rain...' is superb. I can feel and hear the wrath of the storm. Emotions are adeptly tied in with the weather throughout this poem - pathetic fallacy at its very best! S :)
Truly marvelous poetry written here...great imagery and smooth tone...A delight to read! ! ! 10++++
Beautiful piece Fay...wonderful images spring to mind reading it...Fi 10+++
Wow! What a great spirit you have Fay. I can sense the storm and the atmosphere is strong but you are stronger. Amazing poem. 10 Karin Anderson