bluster in moonlight
all around lime trembling trees
and through fragrant fields
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P1 I love windswept nights, wild elemental unleashed energy. Your strong depictions of varying images of wind gusting screaming in stanzas 1,3 and 4, with the moment of calm in 'a far flung dream to be everywhere at once under diamond stars'
My supports for the earnest attempt to describe a crazy wind
P2 in stanza 2, is both realistic of wind drop moments and adorable, dream imagery, everywhere at once, diamond stars, is a beautiful contrast compliment to the other wonderful energy images.
I wrote the poem 'Feel Wind Rising' inspired by the poem 'Windswept Night' by the poet Evelyn Judy Buehler and dedicated to Evelyn Judy Buehler.