Winds Of My Mind Comments
The cool and chilling winter winds,
that whistle round my mind.
Are oh so unforgiving,
as my thoughts start to unwind.
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It's really mind blowing! It chilled my mind and unwind my thoughts too!
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem, much appreciated
Cool and chilling winter winds will soon be replaced with soothing breeze of spring; nothing is for ever....
There seems to be an idea here that outside forces acting on the mind have almost stolen the life away: 'And stop my life from running off, and leaving me behind.' I truly believe the past has some power over the present: 'Of bitter pent up memories, and visions from the past.' And it seems like it is more often the unhappy memories; 'Are oh so unforgiving, ' I think this is awesome writing and the rhyming scheme is one of my favorites; I think it does great justice to this.
Excellent poem, a nice and windy flow taking a reader for the flight of soul.Thanks for sharing :) Best wishes. A.
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7/24/2025 4:27:17 AM # 1.0.0
This is a fantastic poem. Great rhyme and meter. Only two small things detract, both in line thirteen (unlucky number?) : 1) You should always capitalize the word I when referring to yourself. 2) There is such as word as THESES (It's the plural of THESIS) but I think in this case you meant to say THESE. Again, wonderful poem and congratulations on having it selected as Poem of the day!
Hi Kim, many thanks for your kind review. I've tried to change the errors a couple of times but they don't stay in