Winds Of Change Comments

a nice juxtaposition of Spring and Autumn centering around the Bud, a very unique treatment of a very very philosophical thought, which has been so adequately described in the right language and feelings. the more i read the more i wish to read.thanx

This is amazing...the promise that the future holds has been painted in words through the story of a bud waiting in expectation of the coming spring (called eternal only to know that it will one day go away)

I love the touch of God in the poem; which takes the poem to a higher level and incvariably brings in the element of love and hope. In an age with all the right reasons to be depressed, your poems are a refreshing departure. A single line 'Of repressed desires' brings the poem right into the centre of our existence. Thanks for sharing

Great depth of feeling here Asma. a beautiful lyrical poem, with wonderful expressions of nature. A delight to read. Sorry I'm a little late in perusing it. Lovely write. Love Ernestine XXX

excellent poem........loved reading it..........Trumpeting the arrival of Spring...thanks for sharing peace jibin

Refreshingly eloquent penning young lady...Crisp, tight structure, yet still mellifluously smooth...Stellar imagework...Solid Crafting, Asma. FjR

I love how the poem unfolds and leaves the reader with a question. It's always a pleasure to read your poems!

A lovely poem Asma, the title fits perfectly with your words......All the best, Diane

a really attractive poem loved it! hope u emerge with some more of this kind of poetry. Well Done! ! regards, Nida

A lovely poem Asma, I love the title it sets the tone for this beautiful poem. The content is well thought out and gives a peaceful feel to it. Thankyou for such beauty Asma. A big (10) from me.---Melvina---

Nicely chosen words - and not one wasted! I like the thoughtful tone of this poem; it is one to savour over several readings. Definitely a 10 from me!

we all long for it.......beautiful imagination......loved it....

we all longe for eternal spring but seldomly find it....good one...

Intersting piece, the winds of change a lovely title....