Wednesday, March 5, 2008

Winds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Through the clouds it brushes
Through mountains it pushes
Through the bell it sounds
Through the hair it waves
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nick trager
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Coreena Dejesus 08 March 2008

Well written, choice words. Thanks for sharing.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 08 March 2008

Very nice how you depicted the winds.

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~ Soldier ~ ~girl~ 06 March 2008

i dont think that you can write a bad poem nice job

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