Saturday, September 8, 2012

Windowsill Comments

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I'm sitting on my windowsill
in a cold September's night,
listening to the last noises of the summer
and watching planes in the sky.
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Lynette Lawrence
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 10 September 2012

Some how at the end.well, i love your imaginary that you had at the beginning of this art. Planes.! ! ! but stars are more brighter, aren't they? he he, just kidding. this poem is awesome. well done Good job.

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