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Honking to clear its way/And when you must shut all the doors/For you don't want the world/To probe your wounds...loneliness is the befitting solution to the problems you have addressed in this thought provoking poem...10

2. Quotidian objects and ordinary happenings have a special place in modernist poetry: Those masterful images because complete Grew in pure mind, but out of what began? A mound of refuse or the sweepings of the street, Old kettles, old bottles and a broken can, Old iron, old bones, old rags … - Yeats

1. The sights and sounds of ordinary, every-day (quotidian) objects and events are internalized to lift the burden of sorrow inside. A nice contrast between doors being shut to keep out world that probes and digs versus opening of windows to let in an indifferent & non-judgmental world of ordinary life

Honking to clear its way! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Wind talks with windows and rain breaks their sleep. A powerful imagination is reflected well in this brilliantly penned poem. Moving through streets we can see raindrops falling on window panes. External air draws and invite attention. Wonderful poem is beautifully penned with deep expression.10