Sunday, February 24, 2008

Window On The World Comments

Rating: 5.0

As in my absence you left the earthly land
when I was primed with all my earthly sane
when I smiled with joy across your voices cuckoo
As law when truth absolute bound by the Godly frames.
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Dr subhendu kar
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Tsira Goge 06 March 2008

Very touching and it is close, as a related soul... 10.......... Tsira

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Anjali Mandokhot 29 February 2008

yet I didn’t see your rave up on shore in repose but I do embrace the sands melting you above as I blaze the tribute to your soul eternal your semblance being cradled by blissful swings....... lovely and inexplicably beautiful.....so full of imagery and emotions wishes anjali

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Patrice James 28 February 2008

very heartfelt work dr. thanks for sharing.......................

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Jing Jing 26 February 2008

this is very sad and full of emotional write, i could truly feel your hurt.....once again well penned.

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good bye 25 February 2008

Dr. this is a very beautiful tribute to my mum, and i am much more hurt to loss my mum, but you see life must go on, and as my mum wish us to be..dont be sad cause she is by us....i love this one dr. its so beautiful write. Micah

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CU2urDream Lost 24 February 2008

Dr. Also for me was not easy to accept that is not any more around me, as she teach me much of love although i made her cry many times but she truly got a humble heart, and everytime I hear her song, my tears just fall, but anyway Dr. before she left as she told me that she sang a song to you live on the phone, and so you hear her singing on the phone? you are so special to her, as she tod me about your sharing how you believe and how she believes, she tolds me that you prayed for her on the temple for her healings, but you see Dr. she wanted to let go, she suffered already many times, although its hard and pain for us lets blessed her soul for eternity. wonderful write and a beautiful tribute to our special friend. Best regards, Maris Lane

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Melvina Germain 24 February 2008

I didn't have the opportunity to get to know this wonderful lady 'Mary Wismer', having said that after reading your most eloquent tribute to your dear friend Mary, I can see that she was truly a special person and loved and respected by her peers. Your poem is exquisite, truly beautiful and heartfelt. Melvina

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Broken Peaces 24 February 2008

A beautiful write Dr. written in the words of true friendship thanks for sharing High regards Chris 10

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Thad Wilk 24 February 2008

What a beautiful tribute to Mary Wismer Dr. Kar! To her soul eternal. She will always be remembered by all! ! A wonderful lady! Best Regards, Friend Thad

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Meggie Gultiano 24 February 2008

I was touched by the last two lines here, Dr..and you simply disappeared by His trust in truth, when i opened my window on the world.. i think there was still a disbelief in a disappearing loved one, or a hold on in your heart, still not accepting that that person is gone already. this line, WHEN I OPEN THE WINDOW ON THE WORLD...are your expectations for something unfinished desire of your heart, or any thing you wanted to convey....A wonderful masterpiece of yours and i am glad i happened to pass by here in your sight.. Love, Meggie

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Tiffanie Lau 24 February 2008

a truly awesome write. glad i didn't miss this one. thanks for sharing!

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