Monday, June 7, 2010

Window O' Heaven Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweaty days and cruel summer,
without sleep and hunger,
star's burning and causing anger,
stay indoors and feel better,
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 26 July 2010

================= ================= Thunderous and Rebellious Poetry against scorching biting blistering sun [summer] to be soothed by the lithe emollient of thunderous cloud…and its violence to subdue the vociferous sun… Here Ma’am I remember RNT’s description of ‘Kaal Baishkhi’ [Thunderous moments of Summer Vaishak] …excellent diction as usual with your uncanny high pitch…. Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Window o' heaven... portal of life, and hope. Delightful poem. Good one; D

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