Monday, February 22, 2016

Window Moon Comments

Rating: 4.6

the window moon is bright
the muted world is still
and there is peace within
but night has brought a chill
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Barry Middleton
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Margaret O Driscoll 23 February 2016

'Trembling in their place', lovely work Barry

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Barry Middleton 23 February 2016

Thank you very much.

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Dimitrios Galanis 22 February 2016

Sounds a beauty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 February 2016

Dark infinity where wisdom surely hides. An amazingly conceived and beautifully penned poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Nosheen Irfan 22 February 2016

This poem gives a sense of peace n serenity. Its very soothing for the nerves. Written with a charming simplicity.

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Barry Middleton 22 February 2016

Then I achieved my goal. Thank you.

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Ravinder Soni 22 February 2016

Your dream taking you beyond the lighted track is subconsciously attaining nirvana but you have called that a dark infinity hiding wisdom baffles me.

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Barry Middleton 22 February 2016

We do not really know what Nirvana is. It lies in darkness beyond our knowledge. The wisdom of God is hidden if it does exist. The poem is intended to intrigue both the theist and the atheist.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 22 February 2016

Wonderful poetic trip and mesmerizing view of the moon and the galactic horizon.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 22 February 2016

Wonderful poetic trip and mesmerizing view of the moon and the galactic horizon

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