the window moon is bright
the muted world is still
and there is peace within
but night has brought a chill
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Dark infinity where wisdom surely hides. An amazingly conceived and beautifully penned poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
This poem gives a sense of peace n serenity. Its very soothing for the nerves. Written with a charming simplicity.
Your dream taking you beyond the lighted track is subconsciously attaining nirvana but you have called that a dark infinity hiding wisdom baffles me.
We do not really know what Nirvana is. It lies in darkness beyond our knowledge. The wisdom of God is hidden if it does exist. The poem is intended to intrigue both the theist and the atheist.
Wonderful poetic trip and mesmerizing view of the moon and the galactic horizon.
Wonderful poetic trip and mesmerizing view of the moon and the galactic horizon
'Trembling in their place', lovely work Barry
Thank you very much.