Friday, June 9, 2023

Window Dressing Comments

Rating: 5.0

False smiles and glitter, hiding the pain,
covering the struggle, again and again,
behind the glass, lies a world unknown
window dressing, tricky zone.
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Juhaina Shiraz
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Sheeya Hacks 11 June 2023

Profound, A lonely soul, with no one to confide, lost in a world, where emotions hide.

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Gordon Walter 11 June 2023

Loved it, won't eat your profile pictures. Me an eagle your friend.

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Anjandev Roy 11 June 2023

This is a powerful work......thanks for sharing.....

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We tend to dress just our windows, but forget to dress our lives

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D.N. Rebb 10 June 2023

The worst abuse is the domestic kind. Your words define the pain almost too well. Great poem.

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M. Asim Nehal 09 June 2023

Difficult to pierce thru and see the real things, I liked the Title and the subject you chose.5****

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Deepak S S 09 June 2023

Window dressing: - a tricky zone, a hiding distress, a lifeless stunt, how well you described it.

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